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  • February 20th.

    • Today is Wednesday, February 20th.
    • I went to school, I took chemistry and dance class.
    • Today before to go to school, my mommy said me: "bring that padlock and will use that on your school locker".
    • Well, When I took the padlock and save on my backpack.
    • When I took the bus, I got a magazine and I saw some sheets, but I saw something interesting, I read: "love padlocks".
    • The notice said: A new tradition over Paris among lovers, It is about leaving padlock at "Pont des Arts" as symbolof love and throw the key down into the river.
    • I love I love that notice, When I put the padlock, I took it again, and I took a marker from my pocket and call to Xiomy, and she wrote on it us names.
    • After to returned home, I baked a colorful cake, tomorrow in school, we will eat cake.
    • I need rest, last night I couldn't sleep good again, then I I feel very tired.
    • Today came home a boy that I hate.
  • That boy did me something that I don't like, when I saw that he entered to my home, I was rather go out home.

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