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  • On Maintaining Trust

  • Trust is crucial and indispensable in maintaining a relationship.
    • Without trust,people can't get along well with others.Needness to say,we can give help from others.People is social animal.Without communication,the life will become more boring and dull.In my opinion,how to build and maintain trust is very imporant for us.There are some main suggeation as follow.
    • Firstly,become honesty.Do not lie to the person who love you and trust you.As a China saying goes:Once bitten,twice shy.Persional relationship is delicate.Once you lied, the relationship between you and he(she) will change and can not return to before.Secondly,promise-keeping.If you can not carry out you promise,do not make a promise.It is irresponsible for you and other people.Thirdly,good attitude.People with good attitude are always welcome.When you communicate with other people politely,you will get praise from them.
    • There are still some other fluential factors.However, as far as my concerned,the reasons I listed above are vital important.

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    • Without trust,people can't get along well with others.Needness to say,we can give help from others.People is social animal.Without communication,the life will become more boring and dull.In my opinion,how to build and maintain trust is very imporant for us.There are some main suggeation as follow.
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    • Without trust, people can't get along well with others. Neednless to say, we can give help fromto others. People isare social animal.s. Without communication, their lifeves will become more boring and dull. In my opinion, how to build and maintain trust is very important for us. There are some main suggeastions as follows.
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    • Firstly,become honesty.Do not lie to the person who love you and trust you.As a China saying goes:Once bitten,twice shy.Persional relationship is delicate.Once you lied, the relationship between you and he(she) will change and can not return to before.Secondly,promise-keeping.If you can not carry out you promise,do not make a promise.It is irresponsible for you and other people.Thirdly,good attitude.People with good attitude are always welcome.When you communicate with other people politely,you will get praise from them.
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    • Firstly, become honesty. Do not lie to the person who loves you and trusts you. As a Chinaese saying goes: Once bitten,twice shy. Persional relationship iss are delicate.Once you lied, the relationship between you and he(sim(her) will change and can not return to the way it was before .Secondly,promise-keeping. keeping your promises. If you can not carry out your promise, do not make a promisone. It is irresponsible ofor you and other people.Thirdly, have a good attitude. People with good attitudes are always welcome. When you communicate with other people politely,you will get praise from them.
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