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  • Should holidays be eco-friendly?

    • In summer 2011 my whole family and I went on a cruise.
    • We started in Genua, Italia and visited every day a new country for 8 days.
    • The places where we have been were Marseille, Barcelona, Tuna, Malta, Sizilien and Salerno.
    • The purpose of the holiday was actually to relax and to see very much countries and different cultures in a short time.
    • To be honest I don´t know if a cruise is eco-friendly but I think it is not that bad than fly around the world with a big plain.
    • When you go on such a ship you don´t know how much garbage or how much food have to dispose.
    • After my holiday I informed about this and found out that this is incredibly much mass because the people on the ship drink for example a lot of beverages from a tin.
    • I don´t believe that local people are involved in the cruise business because the people who work at such a ship came from all over the world and not only from the destinations we visited.
    • Although this business have one big positive impact.
    • These are the better economic situation because the day trippers buy things or need a guide or something like that and so in this towns are more jobs for the local people.
    • I would say I left a middle size of the CO2 footprint but I only have to say that it was such a great experience for my life that I will not miss.
    • At my next holiday I plan to inform me until I went there and search for solutions how I can make my trip eco-friendlier and not to exploit the local people.

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    • To be honest I don´t know if a cruise is eco-friendly but I think it is not that bad than fly around the world with a big plain.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • To be honest, I don´'t know if a cruise is eco-friendly, but I think it is not thatas bad thanas flying around the world within a big plaine.
    • To be honest, I don´t know if a cruise is eco-friendly but I think it is not thatas bad thanas flying around the world within a big plaine.
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    • After my holiday I informed about this and found out that this is incredibly much mass because the people on the ship drink for example a lot of beverages from a tin.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • After my holiday, I informasked about this and found out that this is incredibly much massit is a lot because the people on the ship drink for example a lot of beverages from a tin, for example.
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    • I don´t believe that local people are involved in the cruise business because the people who work at such a ship came from all over the world and not only from the destinations we visited.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I don´'t believe that local people are involved in the cruise business because the people who work aton such a ship came from all over the world and not only from the destinations we visited.
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    • These are the better economic situation because the day trippers buy things or need a guide or something like that and so in this towns are more jobs for the local people.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • These areOne impact is the better economic situation, because the day trippers buy things or need a guide or something like that, and so infor this towns there are more jobs for the local people.
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    • I would say I left a middle size of the CO2 footprint but I only have to say that it was such a great experience for my life that I will not miss.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I would say I left a middle size of the CO2 footprint, but I only have to say that it was such a great experience for my life that I will not miss.
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    • At my next holiday I plan to inform me until I went there and search for solutions how I can make my trip eco-friendlier and not to exploit the local people.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • At my next holiday I plan to inform meeducate myself until I wentgo there and search for solutions how I can make my trip eco-friendlier and not to exploit the local people.
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