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    • XXX is an artist from XXX with very unique universe.
    • Through her drawings and illustrations she presents small fragments of real life and everyday scenes with a very intimate language and a truly personal aesthetic, almost naïf but with tremendously expressive strokes, filled with colors and unusually optimism.
    • Hooked by her style, pleased by her characters, especially by the feminine ones.
    • The way she represents women as unknown heroines, regardless of life conditions, never lose their innocence, spontaneity, willing to dream, and, somehow, manage to remain little girls.
    • From an early age she had an innate ability to draw, she graduated from the School of Arts and Trades in XXX, from where she left to tell the world everything that she fancied, concerned, and made her happy.
    • Currently, with an already established professional carrier, publishes in several publishing houses in the country, working and collaborating with her artworks and exposing on art markets and exhibitions.

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    • Through her drawings and illustrations she presents small fragments of real life and everyday scenes with a very intimate language and a truly personal aesthetic, almost naïf but with tremendously expressive strokes, filled with colors and unusually optimism.
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    • Through her drawings and illustrations she presents small fragments of real life and everyday scenes, with a very intimate language and a truly personal aesthetic, almost naïf. Her work has an almost naïve quality to it, but with tremendously expressive strokes, filled with colors and unusually optimism.
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    • The way she represents women as unknown heroines, regardless of life conditions, never lose their innocence, spontaneity, willing to dream, and, somehow, manage to remain little girls.
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    • The way she represents women as unknown heroines, regardless of life conditions, never lose their innocence, spontaneity, and willingness to dream, and, these somehow, manage to remain being portrayed as little girls.
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    • From an early age she had an innate ability to draw, she graduated from the School of Arts and Trades in XXX, from where she left to tell the world everything that she fancied, concerned, and made her happy.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • From an early age she had an innate ability to draw, s. She graduated from the School of Arts and Trades in XXX, from where she leftafter which she went on to tell the world about everything that she fancied, concerned, andwas passionate about and also what made her happy in life.
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    • Currently, with an already established professional carrier, publishes in several publishing houses in the country, working and collaborating with her artworks and exposing on art markets and exhibitions.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Currently, with an already established professional carrieer, she publishes in several publishing houses in the country, working and collaborating with her artworks, and exposs well as exhibiting onat art markets and exhibitions. ¶
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