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  • Kindergarten or your own Granny

    • In today's world more and more parents think about children's upbringing.
    • Some people send their children to kindergartens.
    • But others consider that it is better to leave their children with grandmothers.
    • On the one hand, parents who send their children to kindergartens.
    • They give their children to develop in the world.
  • Firstly, children can communicate with their peers.
    • Secondly, kinder teachers carry out various developmental activities: modeling, painting, crafts made from natural materials and so on.
    • Besides,children can go to music and physical activities.
    • I would like to note that a child learns to maintain discipline, to hair adults, clean up after themselves, to be independent and to follow a certain routine.
    • On the other hand,kindergartens have some cons.
  • Firstly, children often get sick.
  • Secondly, the child may hear swearing adults and children.
    • Also, parents worry that kinder teacher will not be able to keep track of a large number of children at the same time.
    • Moreover, kinder teachers can shout on children.
    • Now, I would like some words about children's upbringing with grandmothers.
    • On the one hand children have great care and love.
    • They are always dressed, show and fed.
    • On the other hand, children can not sociable with other children.
    • These children will not be able to fend for themselves, if they are hurt.
    • In conclusion, I think that children is better to give in kindergarten then grandmothers.
    • It has more advantages then drawbacks.
    • In the kindergarten children learn to communicate, develop and overcome difficulties without mothers.

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