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    • she listened his name from people around her and saw him and didn't know that was he he and she met many times as strangers by chance he talked to a girl near his girl and she listened his speical voice for a first time After a month ,he became her director by chance and one day he talked to her with focused eyes have a lot of words and from this day they weren't strangers

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    • she listened his name from people around her and saw him and didn't know that was he he and she met many times as strangers by chance he talked to a girl near his girl and she listened his speical voice for a first time After a month ,he became her director by chance and one day he talked to her with focused eyes have a lot of words and from this day they weren't strangers
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    • she listenedheard calling his name from people around her and saw him andbut didn't know that was he¶he and she met many times ashim.¶ she met him accidently many times and they were just strangers by cha.¶Once,he talked to a girl near his girl and she listenedwas talking with a girl near to her and she could hear his speicial voice for athe first time .¶After a month ,he became her director by chaoincidence.¶and one day he talked to her with focused eyes that have a lot of words and fromto say. And since thisat day they weren't strangers any more.
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    • sShe listeneheard his name from the people around her and saw him and didn't know that was he¶he and she had met many times as strangers by chance¶he.¶He was talkeding to a girl near his girl er and she listened to his speical voice for athe first time .¶After a month , he became her director by chance,¶and one day he talked to her with focused eyes thavet had a lot of words and from this day on, they weren't strangers anymore.
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    • she listeneheard his name from the people around her and when she saw him andshe didn't knowrealize that was he¶he and she methad met by chance many times as strangers by chance¶he.¶He was talkeding to a girl near his girl er and she listened his heard his lovely/speicial voice for athe first time ¶After a month ,he became her director by chance¶and one day he tallooked ato her with focused eyes have a lot of wordeyes which expressed his feelings and from thisat day on they weren't no longer strangers¶
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