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    • Nowadays many old cities are rebuilt and redesignerd.

    • A growing increasingly of city's popularity have become necessitated for the reconstruction or extension of city, fulfilling the needs of citizens in contemporary society.
    • It is advised that older buildings should be demolished, for these buildings retarded the development of city.
    • The suggestion is reasonable and corresponding for people' benefits, but the city's designer should pay attention to the protection and renovation in some historical buildings.
    • Apparently, rebuilding of one city can damage the building heritage in one city or one country, for older buildings are normally regarded as the architectural style.
    • Some historical buildings are important of a cityscape portion, especially if those are the landmark building.
    • For example, there is not much different between New York and Beijing, where without the Forbidden City.
  • These buildings underwent the test of time, reflecting their value.
    • These older buildings have been replaced to skyscrapers, which stand in stark contrast to other around buildings.
    • The declining of classical buildings will be gradually eroded by people' sense of identity, for their ideas are as the same as other counties.
    • It is therefore fair to say that it may be justified for high repairing fee, because of cultural or appreciating values of older buildings.
    • We should meanwhile acknowledge that it is a attractive idea that to demolish obsolete buildings so as to extend the street and high-rise buildings.
    • Living at inner city area, some older buildings are responsible for slow development of area underutilisation and transportation networks.
    • It should also be noted that older buildings, such as lights, safety, sanitation, ventilation, swage treatment etc, are better than new buildings.
    • The city center, through streets are remodelled and utilities are upgraded, seems like more comfortable and livable.
    • This is the precursor for a development country, for investors are normally not interested in cities which look not modern.
    • To summarise, the value of older buildings should be balanced to a broader perspective while the extension of cities should not be the only considerable factory.
    • New buildings can be compatible with nowadays buildings, avoiding to have an adverse affection that arise from cultural sense of identity.

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    • A growing increasingly of city's popularity have become necessitated for the reconstruction or extension of city, fulfilling the needs of citizens in contemporary society.
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    • ¶¶A city's growing increasingly of city's popularity have becomes necessitated for the reconstruction or extension of city,ies, to fulfilling the needs of citizens in contemporary society.
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    • The suggestion is reasonable and corresponding for people' benefits, but the city's designer should pay attention to the protection and renovation in some historical buildings.
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    • The suggestion is reasonable and corresponding forwith people's benefits, but the city's designer should pay attention to the protection and renovation inof some historical buildings.
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    • Apparently, rebuilding of one city can damage the building heritage in one city or one country, for older buildings are normally regarded as the architectural style.
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    • Apparently, rebuilding of one city building can damage the building heritage in onea city or onea country, for older buildings are normally regarded as the architectural style.
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    • The declining of classical buildings will be gradually eroded by people' sense of identity, for their ideas are as the same as other counties.
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    • The declininge of classical buildings will be gradually eroded by people' sense of identity, for their ideas are as the same as other counties'.
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    • It is therefore fair to say that it may be justified for high repairing fee, because of cultural or appreciating values of older buildings.
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    • It is therefore fair to say that it may be justified for high repairing fee,may be justified because of cultural or appreciationg values of older buildings.
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    • We should meanwhile acknowledge that it is a attractive idea that to demolish obsolete buildings so as to extend the street and high-rise buildings.
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    • We should meanwhileMeanwhile we should acknowledge that it is an attractive idea that to demolish obsolete buildings so as to extend the street and high-rise buildings.
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    • Living at inner city area, some older buildings are responsible for slow development of area underutilisation and transportation networks.
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    • Living atin an inner city area, some older buildings are responsible for slow development of an area, underutilisation and transportation networks.
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    • It should also be noted that older buildings, such as lights, safety, sanitation, ventilation, swage treatment etc, are better than new buildings.
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    • It should also be noted that older buildings features , such as lights, safety, sanitation, ventilation, sewage treatment etc, are better than new buildings.
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    • To summarise, the value of older buildings should be balanced to a broader perspective while the extension of cities should not be the only considerable factory.
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    • To summarise, the value of older buildings should be balanced to a broader perspective while the extension of cities should not be the only considerable factory.
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    • New buildings can be compatible with nowadays buildings, avoiding to have an adverse affection that arise from cultural sense of identity.
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    • New buildings can be compatible with nowadays buildings, to avoiding to haveing an adverse affection that arise from cultural sense of identity.
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