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- Iner Mongolia
- I love travelling.Travelling not only broadens my horizons, but also opens my eyes to the world.Last week,I went to Inner Mongolia with my friends.We rode horses and rode camels.It made us excited.I can send my photos to you in E-mail if you want to see.

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- I love travelling.Travelling not only broadens my horizons, but also opens my eyes to the world.Last week,I went to Inner Mongolia with my friends.We rode horses and rode camels.It made us excited.I can send my photos to you in E-mail if you want to see.
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- I love travelling. Travelling not only broadens my horizons, but also opens my eyes to the world. Last week, I went to Inner Mongolia with my friends. We rode horses and ~~rode~~ camels.~~It made us~~ We were excited. I can send my photos to you invia E-mail if you want to see.
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