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    • Thank you to correct my letter

  • Re: Concerning our project in nanomaterials.
    • I am writing to you about the project that we are doing for one week.
  • This project is very important for our company and we should not be late.
    • In fact, we need every co-worker united on this project and especially Mr Gordon because he is many well-informed and he has necessary skill to do it perfectly.
    • In other words, he has to learn us a lot.
    • Unfortunately, we have got some problems with him.
    • Firstly, he thinks he is superior.
    • For instance, sometimes he speaks too fast so it is too difficult to understand.
    • The other times, he speaks too slowly and we consider it like something offensive and condescending.
    • Secondly, I don't think it's fair to come late every days without explanations.
    • In other words, he is incompetent to come in time.
  • In addition, he doesn’t care about the project and other people are following his behaviour so I am doing their work and I overworked.
    • Thirdly, I think his purpose is only to earn a lot of money without effort.
  • So, that’s not fair and I cannot share this point of view.
    • I am hoping you can help us to resolve this problem because you have a trouble-shooting skills.
    • Without your help, the project will be late and within budget.
  • From my point of view, you should do a one-to-one interview with him.
    • I very much look forward to hearing from you.
  • Best regards,

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