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  • Februay 19th.

  • Today is Tuesday, February 19th.
  • Today I did an exposition for the politics class, I think I did good.
    • I've been able to talk opposite the other guys, I don't felt fear, never I feeling fear when I speak opposite of other people.
    • For tomorrow, I must study for the exam over equations.
    • I maybe tomorrow when returned home I do a colorful cake, to I will bring to school 'cause Vivi will have her birthday and her friends want sing to her.
  • Last night, I had a nightmare, I don't felt so good, I woke up sweaty and sad and tired.
    • I hope sleep good tonight.
    • My aunt called me on the noon, and she said to me: "Vaness, would you like come with her cousin to have a day on the spa, because I couldn't go" I want go but the last week (Friday), the teacher scolded me and I had to stayed one hour more in class.
    • I'm going to get a stethoscope, 'cause my cousin is a doctor and he will buy other and give the old.

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    • I've been able to talk opposite the other guys, I don't felt fear, never I feeling fear when I speak opposite of other people.
      투표하세요!
    • I've been able to talk opposwiteh the other guys, I don't feelt fear, I never I feeling fear when I speak topposite of other people.
      sweetkeishsweetkeish profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • I maybe tomorrow when returned home I do a colorful cake, to I will bring to school 'cause Vivi will have her birthday and her friends want sing to her.
      투표하세요!
    • I mMaybe tomorrow when I returned home, I dowill bake a colorful cake, to I will bring to school 'because Vivi will have her birthday and her friends wantill want to sing to her.
      sweetkeishsweetkeish profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • My aunt called me on the noon, and she said to me: "Vaness, would you like come with her cousin to have a day on the spa, because I couldn't go" I want go but the last week (Friday), the teacher scolded me and I had to stayed one hour more in class.
      투표하세요!
    • My aunt called me on theat noon, and she said to me: "Vaness, would you like cometo go with heyour cousin to have a day oin the spa, because I couldn't go"¶I wanted to go but the last week (Friday), the teacher scolded me and I had to stayed one hour more in class.
      sweetkeishsweetkeish profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • I'm going to get a stethoscope, 'cause my cousin is a doctor and he will buy other and give the old.
      투표하세요!
    • I'm going to get a stethoscope, 'because my cousin is a doctor and he will buy another one and give me the old one.
      sweetkeishsweetkeish profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9