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Text from whiterose1 - English

  • Bad Luck

  • Oh, my bad luck always follows my steps, there's no way to make it to understand my needs, my dad once told me that my luck is sleeping under a big tree like an old man who tired from his life.
  • I've been sitting here by myself thinking back and wondering if that is true, I just hoped that my dad told me where can I find that place, and I wanna ask him one question !!
    • Can you just give me a chance to find my way back to make it right, I always believe that there is a way but we have to find it.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Vakya 1
    • Oh, my bad luck always follows my steps, there's no way to make it to understand my needs, my dad once told me that my luck is sleeping under a big tree like an old man who tired from his life.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
  • Vakya 2
    • I've been sitting here by myself thinking back and wondering if that is true, I just hoped that my dad told me where can I find that place, and I wanna ask him one question !!
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2
  • Vakya 3
    • Can you just give me a chance to find my way back to make it right, I always believe that there is a way but we have to find it.
      Vote now!
    • Can you just give me a chance to find my way back to make it right,. I always believe that there is a way, but we have to find it.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3