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  • Self-assessment

  • A little boy went into a store and pulled a box to the bottom of the phone booth.
  • He climbed up the box to reach the buttons on the phone and began to make a call ...
    • The store owner observed and listened to the conversation which was came between the boy and the old lady.
    • The boy said: "Madam: Can I work in your garden to trim lawn?" Ms. responded: "I have who do this job." The boy said: "I'm going to work at half the fare that taken by this person." Ms. responded that she is satisfied with the work of that person and do not want to replace him.
    • The boy became more urgent and said: "i will clean also pedestrian walkway and the sidewalk in front of your home, and your garden will be the most beautiful park in the city of Palm Beach, Florida" And Ms. again answered in the negative ...
    • The boy smiled and closed the phone.
    • the owner of store - who was listening to the conversation - he said to the boy : I've liked you moving high, and I really respect this positive spirit and offering you to have the opportunity to work in the shop.
    • The little boy replied: "No, thank you for your offer, I am just make sure of my performance for the work I am doing now.
    • I work for this lady that I was talking to her.
    • " What 'need for such a self-evaluation and permanently.

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    • The boy said: "Madam: Can I work in your garden to trim lawn?" Ms. responded: "I have who do this job." The boy said: "I'm going to work at half the fare that taken by this person." Ms. responded that she is satisfied with the work of that person and do not want to replace him.
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    • The boy said: "Madam: Can I work in your garden to trim the lawn?" ¶¶Ms. responded: "I havalready have someone who does this job." ¶¶The boy said: "I'm going toll work at half the fare that taken by this person works for." ¶¶Ms. responded that she is satisfied with the work of that person and does not want to replace him.
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    • The boy became more urgent and said: "i will clean also pedestrian walkway and the sidewalk in front of your home, and your garden will be the most beautiful park in the city of Palm Beach, Florida" And Ms. again answered in the negative ...
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    • The boy became more urgent and said: "iI will also clean alsothe pedestrian walkway and the sidewalk in front of your home, and your garden will be the most beautiful park in the city of Palm Beach, Florida." ¶¶And Ms. again answered in the negative ...
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    • the owner of store - who was listening to the conversation - he said to the boy : I've liked you moving high, and I really respect this positive spirit and offering you to have the opportunity to work in the shop.
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    • ¶tThe owner of the store -, who was listening to the conversation - he, said to the boy : "I've liked you moving high, ¶and I really respect this positive spirit and offering you to have the opportunity to work in the shop."
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    • The little boy replied: "No, thank you for your offer, I am just make sure of my performance for the work I am doing now.
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    • The little boy replied: "No, thank you for your offer,. ¶¶I am just makeing sure of my performance for the work I am doing now.
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