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- Life itself
Hello my friends.
- I'm here today to learn english as much as I can to rise up my career inside the country.
I hope you guys can help me with that. Thanks a lot.

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- Life itself
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- Life iItself
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Sentence 1
- Hello my friends.
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Sentence 2
- I'm here today to learn english as much as I can to rise up my career inside the country.
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- I'm here today to learn english as much as ~~I can to rise up~~possible so I can progress my career inside theis country.
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Sentence 3
- I hope you guys can help me with that. Thanks a lot.
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