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  • Hello :)

    • Hello, I'm an italian girl and my dream is to travel in all the world.
    • But to be more sure of myself, I have to learn foreign languages, and in particular Spanish (beacause I love how it sounds) and English (because it is very popular and I think it is music's language).
    • I hope to have not do many errors! Bye bye!

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    • But to be more sure of myself, I have to learn foreign languages, and in particular Spanish (beacause I love how it sounds) and English (because it is very popular and I think it is music's language).
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    • But to be more sure of myself, I have to learn foreign languages, and in particular Spanish (beacause I love how it sounds) and English (because it is very popular and I think it is music'sa great language to use for music).
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    • But to be more sure of myselfconfident, I have to learn foreign languages, and in particular Spanish (beacause I love howthe way it sounds) and English (because it is very popular and I think it is music'sthe language of music).
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