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  • Cherishing Your Time

    • Everyone thinks that time is cheap .
    • They are confidence and always tell others that time just means something boring or something easy to get.However time always cure people 's sadness which is from the heart,and time always make you have more chance to do more things.When you don't know how to deal with the problem ,you need time .When you are trying to forgive someone ,you need time.Certainly ,everybody needs time ,not only a student ,but also a businessman .Don't let the time escape from your life.Cherishing your time ,you will fell the connection with the time.

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    • They are confidence and always tell others that time just means something boring or something easy to get.However time always cure people 's sadness which is from the heart,and time always make you have more chance to do more things.When you don't know how to deal with the problem ,you need time .When you are trying to forgive someone ,you need time.Certainly ,everybody needs time ,not only a student ,but also a businessman .Don't let the time escape from your life.Cherishing your time ,you will fell the connection with the time.
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    • They are confidencet and always tell others that time just means something boring or isomething easy to get. However time always cures people 's sadness which is from the heart, and time always make you havegives you more chances to do more things. When you don't know how to deal with the problem , you need time . When you are trying to forgive someone , you need time. Certainly , everybody needs time , not only a student , but also a businessman . Don't let the time escape from your life. Cherishing your time , you will fell the connection with the time.
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