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  • Blind Date

    • Because Sophie didn't attend class after the Chinese festival holidays,I played a joy with my friends,said:"She must have a blind date which was planed by her parents."Surprisedly,it doesn't a joy but a fact.Indeed,it is a popularity that having a blind date in holidays,partly planed by parents or relatives.
    • "Do you have a house?" or "How many houses do you have?"or "Can you afford the housing loan?"House must be the main point and usually would be known before the blind date.
    • I approve of blind date,maybe it also a way to find your Mr. right.However,don't put house in the first place,the man accompanying you means everything.

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    • Because Sophie didn't attend class after the Chinese festival holidays,I played a joy with my friends,said:"She must have a blind date which was planed by her parents."Surprisedly,it doesn't a joy but a fact.Indeed,it is a popularity that having a blind date in holidays,partly planed by parents or relatives.
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    • BecausSince Sophie didn't attend class after the Chinese festival holidays, I played a joyjoked with my friends, and said:"She must have been on a blind date which was, planned by her parents.". Surprisedingly, it doesn't a joy but a fact.Indeed,it is a popularity that having a blind date in holidays,partlyturned out to be true. Apparently it is quite common to go on a blind date during the holidays, sometimes planned by parents or relatives.
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    • "Do you have a house?" or "How many houses do you have?"or "Can you afford the housing loan?"House must be the main point and usually would be known before the blind date.
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    • Housing is one of the main topics of conversation on a blind date with the couple asking each other such questions as "Do you have a house?" or, "How many houses do you have?" or "Can you afford the housing loan?"House must be the main point and usually would be known before the blind date.
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    • I approve of blind date,maybe it also a way to find your Mr. right.However,don't put house in the first place,the man accompanying you means everything.
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    • I approve of blind date,s, maybe it is also a way to find your Mr. rRight. However, don't put house in the first place,the man accompanying you means everythinging first, the man by your side is more important.
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