添削

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Dawkaからのテキスト - English

    • My birthplace

  • Karelia is my birthplace.
  • It is situated in the north-west of Russia.
  • The tourists and travelers like a virgin nature, richness of sights and unique northern colour.
  • There are dense forests, clear lakes, white nights and aurora borealises, fishing and grapeshot fruit drink.
  • All these impressions are enough for all your life.
    • Be sure you want to come here again!
  • To see true Karelia you should travel by car, bicycle,or on feet.
  • In winter Karelia is also good: the snowmobiles, the dogs carriages, the snowy and quiet forests.
    • The night in hunting box is necessarily!
    • Generally I advice you to visit Karelia and fall in love with it !

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English