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  • covering letter

    • Dear Sirs!
    • Thank you for your interest and your time.
    • I'm interested in your vacancy of sales manager.
    • The main reason for my job searching is that after graduating with a degree «hotel and tourism business» I am interested in working in the specialty and I want to succeed in this sphere.
    • Especially important for me is to work and to develop in an international company with a worldwide reputation, which you have got.
    • Because I have trained the evening form of education, I already have got a 5-year experience of working in tourism and related areas (insurance, sales, work with foreign partners).
    • The attached summary will give all the information about my professional experience, skills and potential.
    • I believe that my experience may be required for the proposed position.
    • I will be glad to receive your invitation to the interview.
    • If you are interested in my candidacy, you can contact me by phone *** at any time, as well as by e-mail ***.
    • Thank you for your attention

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