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- My day
- Today I woke at 8 o'clock and went to the church, there I find my friends, I was sleepy and I slept in the worship, and when I get up I was alone ashuahsuahs

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- Today I woke at 8 o'clock and went to the church, there I find my friends, I was sleepy and I slept in the worship, and when I get up I was alone ashuahsuahs
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- Today I woke at 8 o'clock and went to ~~the~~ church~~, there~~. I fiound my friends, there. I was sleepy and I slept inthrough the worship~~, and w~~. When I geot up, I was alone ~~ashuahsuahs~~.
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- Today I woke at 8 o'clock and went to the church, there I find my friends, I was sleepy ~~and~~so I slept in the worship, and when I geot up I was alone ashuahsuahs
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