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Learning English
- I live in Algarve and I have as neighbours English people so I need learn English because I want to have a good relationship with them.
- My English is very bad and I hope with this way and with some help from others people here I can learn much fun and easy.
- So if some one after write this my first experience find some errors in this my text I request help me to fix. Fernando

Judul
- Learning English
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- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- I live in Algarve and I have as neighbours English people so I need learn English because I want to have a good relationship with them.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- I live in Algarve and I have ~~as neighbours~~ English people soas neighbours that's why I need to learn English because I want to have a good relationship with them.
  Remimentheour Komentar
  
  Laporkan sebagai spam?
  
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- My English is very bad and I hope with this way and with some help from others people here I can learn much fun and easy.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- My English is very bad and I hope with this way and with some help from others people here I ~~can~~will learn ~~much~~loads of funny and easy things.
  Remimentheour Komentar
  
  Laporkan sebagai spam?
  
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- So if some one after write this my first experience find some errors in this my text I request help me to fix. Fernando
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- So if some one after ~~write this my first experience~~my first test to find some errors in ~~this~~ my text I request help me to fix. Fernando
  Remimentheour Komentar
  
  Laporkan sebagai spam?
  
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3