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    • 1Anyone would agree that enrolling in an university is very important in any person's life.
    • Your life takes a different turn.
    • You have a lot of new opportunities to study, to meet new people and have exciting experiences.
    • Higher education is something essential for a formation of personality and for a person's position in society.
    • You need it for major things such as finding a decent job and for trifles like being able to hold a conversation in an intelligent manner.
  • What is more, attending a university which you really like makes you a happier person.
    • It makes you feel like you achieved something in, like you are in your natural element.
    • 2 The first thing i would like to say is that I wanted to get into this university from the first day when i began preparing to my exams.
    • Everything to do with different languages is my great passion.
    • I always wanted to become either interpreter or a teacher.
    • Undoubtedly, I was really happy to find out that graduating from transport university I've got an opportunity to work at both kinds of jobs and even more.
    • As soon as I read about the wide range of opportunities this university gives to it's students I truly fell in love with it.
    • It's undeniable that any applicant student who want to become a philologist dreams of enrolling at transport university.
    • People are generally tend to believe that it is really rare and difficult to move to an english speaking country and to study and live there for a year or so.
    • However I've already heard a lot of various international programs in Transport Universiy.
    • The teaching staff is really skillful they make their work perfectly well.
    • It's just amazing that the students of second courses are already able to communicate in English.
  • Their language is fluent enough for them to freely speak with native speakers.
    • Furthermore, one should not forget the you can take up a lot of activities at transport university.
  • You can go to the swimming pool and play football or other games.
    • Physics culture teachers are good-humored friendly people.
    • They have an important ability to give there students the team feeling.
    • The atmosphere at their lessons is very positive.
    • To draw the conclusion, one can say that studying at a place which you like and wanted to study at makes you satisfied.
    • Also I should assume that for me Transport university is this dream-university.

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    • You have a lot of new opportunities to study, to meet new people and have exciting experiences.
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    • You havThere are a lot of new opportunities for you. For instance there are new opportunities to study, to meet new people, and to have exciting experiences.
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    • Higher education is something essential for a formation of personality and for a person's position in society.
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    • Higher education is something that is essential for a formation ofdeveloping one's personality and for building a person's position in society.
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    • You need it for major things such as finding a decent job and for trifles like being able to hold a conversation in an intelligent manner.
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    • You need it for major things such as finding a decent job, and for trifles like being able to hold a conversation in an intelligent manner.
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    • 2 The first thing i would like to say is that I wanted to get into this university from the first day when i began preparing to my exams.
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    • 2 The first thing i would like to say is that I have wanted to get into this university from the first day when i began preparing tofor my exams.
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    • 2 The first thing iI would like to say is that I wanted to get into this university from the first day when iI began preparing tofor my exams.
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    • Undoubtedly, I was really happy to find out that graduating from transport university I've got an opportunity to work at both kinds of jobs and even more.
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    • Undoubtedly, I was really happy to find out that graduating from transport university I've got an opportunity to work at both kinds of job would be able to work in either of the two fields and even moreothers.
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    • Undoubtedly, I was really happy to find out that upon graduating from tTransport uUniversity I've got anll have the opportunity to work atin both kinds of jobs andfields and maybe even more.
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    • As soon as I read about the wide range of opportunities this university gives to it's students I truly fell in love with it.
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    • As soon as I read about the wide range of opportunities this university gives to it's students I truly fell in love with it.
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    • It's undeniable that any applicant student who want to become a philologist dreams of enrolling at transport university.
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    • It' is undeniable that any applicantprospective student who wants to become a philologist dreams of enrolling at tTransport uUniversity.
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    • People are generally tend to believe that it is really rare and difficult to move to an english speaking country and to study and live there for a year or so.
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    • People are generally tend to believe that it is really rare and difficult to move to an english speaking country and to study and live there for a year or so.
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    • People are generally tend to believe that it is really rare and difficult to move to an eEnglish speaking country andin order to study and live there for a year or so.
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    • It's just amazing that the students of second courses are already able to communicate in English.
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    • It's just amazing that the students of the second coursessemester are already able to communicate in English.
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    • It's just amazing that the students ofin the second coursesterm/ semester are already able to communicate in English.
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    • Furthermore, one should not forget the you can take up a lot of activities at transport university.
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    • Furthermore, one should not forget theat you can take up a lot of activities at tTransport uUniversity.
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    • To draw the conclusion, one can say that studying at a place which you like and wanted to study at makes you satisfied.
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    • To draw theIn conclusion, one can say that studying at a place whichthat you like and wanted to study at makes you feel satisfied.
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