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    • Please help correcting my Essay : first car policy

    • The first reason why the first car policy should be cancelled is that it opposes energy saving policy and cause environmental problems.
    • Some people think this policy will cause serious problems because of too many cars.
    • Cars need petrol and diesel fuel to move.
  • The first car policy gives a chance to people to buy their own cars.
  • People use their cars instead of public cars.
  • Thus, the demand of petrol will increase.
  • Some critics confirmed that we need to import more petrol to meet the demand.
  • It is true that when demand increased, the price will be up. Moreover.
  • Cars not only effect energy saving policy but also cause environmental problems such as pollution and noise.
  • More cars will make much carbondioxide, carbonmonoxide and other gases.
  • These pollutants are dangerous for us.
  • According to scientific research, people receiving too much carbonmonoxide faced serious health problems such as Allergy and Asthma in a long term.
  • However, according to Yinglak Chinnawat, the prime minister, the first car policy will be good for economic growth.
  • The statistic showed that circulation of cars increases up to 75 % from the previous year.
  • It can promote business in car factories in Thailand.
  • The second reason is that the first car policy causes financial problems among people such as the poor and the middle class.
  • Although they have a chance to buy their first car in reduced price, but maybe their income cannot enough to responsible for daily expensed and extravagant expensed.
  • Many people did not think thoroughtly before they bought new cars.
  • They thought this policy will help them save money up to 100,000 baths.
  • That is why the number of selling car increases rapidly.
  • Therefore, people who did not plan and adjust their money in a right way will face financial problems.
  • On the other hand, critics confirmed that the first car policy also help government to get more public revenue.
  • Taxes from cars will be one of revenue resources.
  • Thus, government will have much money to improve our country such as infrastructure and public transportation.
  • However, the group of people especially the poor and middle class must have more responsible for paying taxes.
  • If they do not have enough money to pay for cars immediately or in a few months, they have to pay more extra interests.
  • The interests depends on how long they can pay back in installments.
  • Finally, the first car policy is a cause of traffic jam problems.
  • This is because people have their own cars to drive.
  • Especially in the rush hours, too many cars are on the road.
  • They may cause serious traffic congestion in the big cities.
  • Moreover, it is claimed that the accident will increase because of many cars and new drivers.
  • On the other hand, people have their own cars to use.
  • It is more convenient and safe than using motorcycles or public cars.
  • They have not to wait for the bus or public transportation when they are in a hurry.
  • They can choose the route they want to go and they can take a break whenever they want.
  • Having their own car is great when they want to go on vacation with family.
  • However, if most people use their own car to go to work although they can walk by themselves, it will increase more problems in traffic congestion

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