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zhanshijuan'den mesaj - English

    • The Mid- Autumn Festival Trip

    • We have three days off for the Mid- Autumn Festival.
    • I didn’t have any plans before, because it is like usual weekend and plus one day off.
    • The day before the festival, I got an idea: why not visit my old friends in the near city?
    • Anyway, I got three days, it is waste time if I just stay at home and do nothing.
    • (Here I want to use a word to express someone always stay at home, playing computer.
    • Please tell me a fashion word.) I wanted to book bullet train tickets online, but found there was no remaining ticket to city A, because most of office workers took this chance to reunion with their family or have a short trip.
    • They planned it for a longtime, and booked a good time ticket, once the reservation time up.
    • After that I turned to my friend for help, so I can take a ride of her colleague.
    • Anyway I got two tickets from city A to city B, and city B back to my city.
  • I arrived at city A smoothly.
  • After a pleasant tour with my friend, I cleared up my bag and there was a strange feeling coming from nowhere.
    • It seemed that I didn’t bring my ID card, this uncertain became a truth, after I search out my bag.
    • What am I suppose to get ticket without my ID card?
    • You know, in China you can only buy a train ticket with your ID card, if you book it online, you can use your ID card get on the train directly or use your ID card to get a paper ticket to get on the train.
    • But without it, you can do nothing.
    • It is not easy at a time when the network is unavailable and your phone is out of battery, so you can’t even call your friend to help without knowing her phone number.
    • After struggling with myself, the phone charged enough to power on, I called my friend to cancel the online ticket and decided to buy bus ticket.
    • It funny that it only takes 20 minutes on bullet train, ¥20; it takes one and a half hour by bus, ¥45.
    • There is no remaining seat on bus, I thought, are these guys forgot their ID card like me?
    • Why don’t they buy a bullet train ticket, cost less, but faster?
    • I hope this kind of experience won’t happen anymore, although when you recall them as a funny thing.

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