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Text from RaquelOrtega - English

    • September

  • Hi, everyone!
    • I will type about the reason that I like September.
    • In this month, I start the university and I'm really glad because in this course I can stay with children in a school and teach them.
  • I'm studying to be a teacher for Elementary Education, and I really love kids.
  • I'm interested in their questions and how they regulate their emotions.
    • Furthermore, I'm basketball coach and now I start to train too!
    • I'm wishing to play some matchs and look how the kids enjoy playing basketball!
    • On the other hand, I like September because I celebrate my birthday the 11th of this month.
    • It's a very special date for me because I will stay with my family and other day with my friends.
    • Well, I'm looking forward your corrections.
  • Thanks a lot for your help!
    • Best regards, Raquel.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English