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Text from LordGuinness - English

    • About me.

    • Hi everyone !
  • As some of you may notice, I'm new here.
    • Looking for new, worldwide relationships - which is my main purpose ; getting to know people overseas interests me greatly.
    • Then of course I wish to improve my language skills.
    • I'm French and am currently studying English and Spanish (and if I had had more time, I would have started studying other languages too, such as German, Japanese).
    • Well I've been practicing English for about 8 years and I've had the opportunity to travel to Ireland and Australia (where I met fantastic people, in Adelaide especially).
    • My goal is to become fluent ; I've been told several times my skills were quite good but I still make silly mistakes.
  • And here in France, teachers aren't so good at all...
    • I lack everyday conversation, which would help me greatly.
  • (Oh and yes, I'm not really good at using synonyms.
    • My vocabulary is rather limited.) Otherwise, I am a sophomore in visual arts (arts plastiques in French), have interest in drawing, listening to music, playing the guitar, videogames, and lots of other stuff.
  • (I love gloomy, shabby things too.
    • Ever watched Elfen Lied?
    • You shouldn't miss it, this little beauty is a masterpiece.) You could say I'm quite shy and awkward at first, but people who get to know me and spend time with me ensure that I am quite open-minded and fun to be with !
    • Well well well, I didn't expect to be that talkative.
    • Hope you guys don't get bored by this little presentation. xxx

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