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Hello, my name is Tanya.
- Me 23 years old.
- I live in Russia, Chelyabins city.
- I have a daughter, her 2 years old.
- Her mane is Sofia.
- My hobby is GYM, dance, snowboarding, travel.
- Not so long ago i travel in Egipt, Sharm El Sheikh.
- I like Egipt;) I will want more go in Egipt) I want stady English for communication with foreigners. i want to find friends.

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- Me 23 years old.
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- I live in Russia, Chelyabins city.
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- My hobby is GYM, dance, snowboarding, travel.
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- Not so long ago i travel in Egipt, Sharm El Sheikh.
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- I like Egipt;) I will want more go in Egipt) I want stady English for communication with foreigners. i want to find friends.
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- I like Egiypt;) I w~~ill want more~~ant to go in Egiypt again) I want stady English for communication with foreigners. i want to find friends.
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- I like Egiypt. ;) I w~~ill want more go in~~ant to visit Egiypt more. ) I want to staudy English for communication with foreigners. iI want to find friends.
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- I like Egiypt;), I w~~ill want more go in Egipt)~~ant to go there again. I want to staudy English for communication with foreigners. iI want to find friends.
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- I like Egiypt;). I w~~ill want more~~ant to go into Egiypt) again and I want to staudy English ~~for~~so I can communicat~~ion~~e with foreigners. iI also want to ~~find~~meet new friends.
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