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  • My Dream Job

  • I have been graduated from univesity for half a year and I am a kindergarden teacher.
  • Do you think it is a pity that one was born in one place and live in the same place all his lifetime?
  • I cann't imagine it that is my life.So I decide to be a cruise ship staff.So that I can earn money as well aw go around the world.Also it give me a chance to meet people from different countries,enrich my experience,boarden my horizon.I am getting ready for the interviwe on October.
  • Use limited lifetime to do something worthy.Just like a Chinese saying said:In order to attain wisdom, it is not enough merely to read books, you must be well travelled as well.

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    • I cann't imagine it that is my life.So I decide to be a cruise ship staff.So that I can earn money as well aw go around the world.Also it give me a chance to meet people from different countries,enrich my experience,boarden my horizon.I am getting ready for the interviwe on October.
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    • Use limited lifetime to do something worthy.Just like a Chinese saying said:In order to attain wisdom, it is not enough merely to read books, you must be well travelled as well.
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