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  • From time to time the light came back for a few seconds, like a snowflake, bright, cold and short-lived.
    • But then it was blown away by the wind of her dispair and faded again into darkness.
    • She knew it was no real hope, no real promess of happiness.
  • It was just a sudden blast of life, the power of her heart beating and a fragile sparkle in her eyes.
    • Nothing at all, but she could feel it as long as it last, for two, free seconds, once a week or a bit less.
    • And during those infrequent seconds she became aware of life happenning around her.
    • She became suddenly alive in her saddness and felt the beginning of a slight smile bear on her lips.

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