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    • Places of interests in Russia

  • Russia is the largest country in the world.
    • It has long and interesting history.
  • The country is famous for many places of interests.
    • The capital of Russia is Moscow and it is the largest city of the country.
    • Other large and famous city in Russia is Saint Petersburg.
    • It was the capital of the country once.
  • These two cities have a lot of places of interests.
    • For example, Kremlin which is placed in heart of Moscow, the Big Theatre (or the Bolshoi Theatre) and many other.
  • Saint Petersburg is famous for its magnificent architecture.
  • Almost every building looks like rare masterpiece.
    • A lot of people travel on some Russian cities which call the Golden Ring.
    • The Golden Ring includes such cities like Suzdal, Vladimir, Ivanovo, Yaroslavl and many others.
  • These cities are famous for their rich history and old churches.
    • Also tourist may take a part in some original festivals during visiting these cities.
    • Other famous place of interests in Russia is placed in center of Asia.
    • It calls Altay.
  • A lot of tourists want to see this amazing region which famous for its crystal clear lakes, high mountains and other natural wonders.
    • The deepest lake in the world Baikal is also placed in Russia in the East Siberian region.

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