添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Lilya1994からのテキスト - English

  • Hobby

    • Hobby is favorite occupation of person in his free time.
  • People are different and they have different hobbies.
    • Somebody loves to knit or sew, somebody likes to do something by his hands or draw or take photos.
    • Some children and adults are get involved in collecting.
  • They collect old coins, postcards and stamps.
    • Hobby helps to people to relax, forget their problems and good spend their time.
  • My hobby is learning English.
    • Today especially important to know foreign languages, they help us in work and travels.
    • Anybody, who knows foreign language can speak with foreigners, read foreign authors in original what broaden horizons.
    • Now English one of important languages in politic, trade and culture connections.
    • English is language of computers.
    • Learning English for pleasure includes listening for favorite English songs, watching movies without dubbing, communicating with friends from English-speaking countries.
    • All this things make my life more exiting.
  • I think my hobby is very interesting and helpful

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English