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    • Hello :) In today's world, learning English has become requisite in order to get a job.Hence, ı want to learn English to live prosperity.
    • I thinked that I go to the english course in Turkey, but people who went to the courses, criticized badly so I have given up go to the courses.After that I see this web site and I liked the site because it has good strategy to teach english.
    • I hope I will not only learn English but also I make a lot friends.
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    • Hello :) In today's world, learning English has become requisite in order to get a job.Hence, ı want to learn English to live prosperity.
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    • Hello :)¶In today's world, learning English has become requisite in order to get a job.Hence, ı want to learn English to live in prosperity.
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    • Hello :)¶In today's world, learning English has become a requisite in order to get a job. Hence, ıI want to learn English tso I can live in prosperity.
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    • I thinked that I go to the english course in Turkey, but people who went to the courses, criticized badly so I have given up go to the courses.After that I see this web site and I liked the site because it has good strategy to teach english.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • I thinked that I go to the eought I wanted to go on a English course in Turkey, but people who went to the courses, criticized it badly so I have given up go to the courses.on it. After that I seefound this web site and. I liked the site because it has good strategy to teach eEnglish.
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