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- hi
- I am new here!!I want to improve my English.
- If you want to learn Cantonese and Mandarin,then add me or send emails

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- I am new here!!I want to improve my English.
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- I am new here!!, and I want to improve my English.
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- If you want to learn Cantonese and Mandarin,then add me or send emails
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- If you want to learn Cantonese and or Mandarin, then add me or send eme an e-mails.
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