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    • During college, I did an internship as sale in big library, I have to shadowing a librarian.
    • There was a woman who was very embarassed, looking around her, and she came to me and told me that she is an analphabet and she couldn't chose short stories for her kids.
    • I suggested to help her choosing the books, because I had a large knowledge about short stories.
    • So, I asked her about her children age, and I choose a ten of the most popular short stories which kids liked the most.
    • She was satisfied and greated me, after a week she came back to the library, very happy and asking for me to help her to chose another short stories for her kids.
    • I was greated by the boss and he gave me the best mark a college student could have.

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    • There was a woman who was very embarassed, looking around her, and she came to me and told me that she is an analphabet and she couldn't chose short stories for her kids.
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    • There was a woman who was very embarassed, looking around her, and she came to me and told me that she is an analphabetilliterate and she couldn't choose short stories for her kids.
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    • So, I asked her about her children age, and I choose a ten of the most popular short stories which kids liked the most.
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    • So, I asked her about her children's age, and I choose a ten of the most popular short stories which kids liked the most.
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    • She was satisfied and greated me, after a week she came back to the library, very happy and asking for me to help her to chose another short stories for her kids.
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    • She was satisfied and greaeted me, after a week she came back to the library, very happy and asking for me to help her to choose another short storiesy for her kids.
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