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Text from Darina1997 - English

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  • The presentation was over and a lot of spectators went down to the gallery to examine the dead animals predators.
  • Princes Lindagul was overcome with curiosity.
  • After all she happened to see merely songbirds and flowers.
  • Attended by maidservants and guards she descended and the slaves spread out embroidered carpets under her legs so she wouldn't soil her shoes with the blood-stained sand.
  • What did they have to fear?
  • All the predators which were still alive were locked in the firm cages and the wildest of them -- tiger Ariman -- lay dead on the sand.
  • The princess walked up to dead Ariman and excited by the tigers beauty decided to ask her father to give this magnificent skin to her palace as a gift.
  • And here all of a sudden the 'dead' tiger rose up to his paws jumped and and rushed to the princes, seized her with its horrible teeth and whirled away.
  • The cry of horror bursted out of breasts of the thousands of the spectators.
  • But no one had courage enough to snatch the tiger's picking out of his scaring jaws.
  • Only the young noble prince Abderaman blocked the predator's way, grabbed at his blood-stained chest and began fighting him.
  • Poor prince, the tiger bit his right arm off.
  • And before the aim came, prince dripping with blood, was already lying on the sand.
  • And the tiger jumped over barrier with princess Lindagul in its teeth.

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