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Text from Shihs - English

    • image lover

  • We always love the person we imagine.
    • When we met the person who has the perfect look, and we always think they have the perfect characteristic, too.
  • But, it's just our imagination.
    • When we be together with them, everything will be found out.
    • Then we'll say "hey, you become different" .
    • Actually, they're just what they original are, they don't change anything.
    • And also, when we see someone we're attracted by their appearance, we think they must have every characteristic we like, sporty, honest, smart etc. We think they're perfect in everything.
    • But, We just love the person of our image.
    • So, we should understand we love the person because of who they're not what we imagine.

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