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Text von tomzhang - English

  • letter

    • Dear Mr. Zhang, My name is tom who had an interview with you 2 days ago.
  • Thanks for your time and patience.
    • Now I am eager to know what consequence of it is.
    • I think you have a lot of the candidates in recently that perhaps causes you can’t remember all of us.
    • So allow me to introduce what kind of the position I applied.
  • I request as a senior sales in your enterprise that I found this job in the newspaper.
  • My major duty is that sale the TV sets which are produced by own company to supermarket in Shanghai.
  • In general I need lead a small team to developer more clients and create more stable relationship with supermarket.
  • Meanwhile I should be a team leader as a part of my responsibility.
  • That means I should hold a daily meeting and make a simply report to the sales director every week.
  • Above is what I applied in you company.
  • Through the interview, I think I already showed my competences and passions and also receive your positive responses.
  • But the problem is until now I haven’t received your reply.
  • At same time, I got another offer which is from company B which do the same business just like your company.
  • If you couldn't give me result in the week.
  • I afraid I have to accept that job, though your company is so incredible in this industry.
  • Best Regards Tom Wang

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