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    • "Breaking Bad" is a great serials

    • As not a young guy, it seems hard to find someone to speak English to.
    • Although at this moment I am living in Australia, all around the people speak English.
    • So I watch the America serials "Breaking Bad" to improve my listening and reading.
    • This serials is talking about a high school teacher Walter White, who had found he has a lung cancel and worry his son and unborn daughter's life in the future.
    • He start make myth with his student Jesse Pinkman. and then start a serial crime..
    • At the first, I feel sympathy to Walter, but after season 3, I thought he is all lost in his evil business, he take care his family. but he will hurts lots lots and lots family. don't he even think about that?
    • I will like to download the subtitle then read every word. m...
    • season 5 looks a very big job. hope I can finish it...

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    • This serials is talking about a high school teacher Walter White, who had found he has a lung cancel and worry his son and unborn daughter's life in the future.
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    • This serials is talking about a high school teacher Walter White, who had founddiscovered that he has a lung cancel and worryies about the future life of his son and his unborn daughter's life in the future.
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    • At the first, I feel sympathy to Walter, but after season 3, I thought he is all lost in his evil business, he take care his family. but he will hurts lots lots and lots family. don't he even think about that?
      투표하세요!
    • At the first, I feelt sympathy tofor Walter, but after season 3, I thought he is allwas completly lost in his evil business,. Although he takes care of his family. but he will hurts lots lots and lots family. don't hehe hurts lots of other families, without even thinking about thait?
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    • At the first, I feel sympathy tofor Walter, but after season 3, I thought he is all lost in his evil business, even though he takes care his family. bBut, he will hurts lots lots and lots family. do many families. Doesn't he even think about that?
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