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Text from vaness182 - English

  • February 14th

    • Today is thursday, February 14th.
    • Today is Valentines Day.
    • In the morning when I was going to the school bus, I don't saw to Xiomy, she weren't on the bus.
    • Rarely 'cause she lives one flour under me, normally we go together to the school bus.
    • When I arrrived to school, I went to my classroom and I saw something on my chair, was a big big big teddy and little letter, when I went near I felt a hug me back of me.
    • the weather is angry, the last days were cold, we are on winter.
    • Tonight I'm going to stay with Xiomy, then, I'm need that she are going to my house for I can do her present.
    • I'm going to inflate the ballons on her room, in the rope ballons, I hand the scrapbook ball, into scrapbook ball are candies, photos, and her present.
    • I hope that she will be able to found her present. changed the topic, the day was a success, we ate pizza, the guys sang us and gave a presents and we danced and I enjoied.

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