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- Hi,l am talking about my best friend she's name mona she's so cut,love travel and buoty girl .
- She's love red color ,sea ,shopping and her hair .

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- Hi,l am talking about my best friend she's name mona she's so cut,love travel and buoty girl .
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- Hi, l am talking about my best friend ~~she's name mona s~~. Her name is Mona. She's so cut,e, she loves travel ~~and buoty~~ling and, apart from that, she's a beautiful girl .
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- Hi,l am talking about my best friend she'sr name is mona she's so cut,e, loves to travel and ~~buoty~~is a beautiful girl .
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- She's love red color ,sea ,shopping and her hair .
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- She's loves red colo~~r ,~~(u)r, the sea , shopping and her hair .
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- She's love ~~red~~s the color ,red, the sea , shopping, and her hair .
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