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  • Movie Review

    • After I finished the movie The Color Purple directed by Steven Allan Spielberg who is one of my favorite directors.
  • Actually I was confused at the end of the movie, to the point, I haven’t got the main clue of this movie, just because plots of this movie skips too fast for me -who hasn’t read the novel-to understand.
  • Then I got a second glimpse, wholly, and referred to the plot overview, I finally get a grasp of idea about the whole movie.
  • It talked about a woman’s gradual awakening of female’s fight.
    • The heroine Celie is raped by her stepfather who she calls “Pa”, and two children Olivia and Adam of her were sold by the cruel nature father.
    • Then she married to the old and brutal wifeless man Albert.
    • In this part I was first astonished by Albert’s slapping on Celie’s face and saying you do what I tell you, because I begin to realize that Celie is not wife or even a person of him but a slave of his own.
    • After several days, to avoid Pa’s harassment the elder sister Nellie came to her brother in law’s home for shelter which turns out to be another abyss.
    • It truly makes me disgusted when I see the scene that ugly and fake Albert riding on the galloping horse swings his hands like gentlemen and throwing out rose petal from his hat like playboy.
    • Fortunately his rape was failed at last, but instead he dismisses Nellie.
    • Again and again Celie tries her best to remain her beloved sister for she knows there are no shelters for her to come, but under the shadow of the brute and physical strong man, the two girls’ struggle are in vain, step by step from the doorway to ground Celie grasps Nellie’s feet tightly, and she holds Nellie intensively onto the pillar, but little by little Nellie is drove out and dropped on the floor heavily.
    • At this time a deep sense occurred to me that women are too feeble and vulnerable to fright for their right.
  • The same sense came to my mind too when I watched the movie Raise The Red Lantern directed by Yimou Zhang, the heroine Song Lian married to a rich old man who has already had 3 wives, -of which the phenomenon was common in China in old times-she has neither right nor dignity in the big old house, women are just man’s toys and tools for giving birth to sons, they are not humankinds but dogs or cats, the master can execute his concubines privately that no one can disclose.
    • Whereas Celie’s situation is father worse than Song Lian, for she is a bimbo, a babysitter, a worker, and a slave instead of a wife.
    • And groups of black women at that time were treated as born slaves, that’s the reason why when the poor Sofia’s being imprisoned by the mayor.
  • When the strong and fat Sofia besieged and cursed by angry white men and women, she is overwhelmed at last, the moment she calls for help makes me desperate, for I realized that not only the thin and mentally weak Calie like women are overwhelmed by men but also strong and fat Sofia like women should be surpassed by manhood, they are slaved by black man, by write women and by write men, Some honor man had said that no one is a lonely island, but I have to say that the black women are.
  • Nevertheless sunset comes little by little, When Shug who is a singer also a sinner comes to Celie’s miserable life one night with heavy rain, roar thunder and gusty wind, which means everything should change and sunshine should come up soon.
    • Though the evolution is full of ups and downs, it moves step by step.
  • Shug’s beautiful song Miss Celie’s Blues easily break down Celie’s door of soul, and her gentle kiss nearly awakes Celie, but Celie is Celie, She ultimately can not gather her strength to fly with Shug, instead she faint and dropped on the floor.
  • Under the long oppression, she can not revive from it suddenly while it is a start only.
  • Next follows an episode which tells Sofia’s miserable experience.
  • To tell the truth, I thought Sofia should be the single black women who can change her life and state by her hand at first, however, to my disappointment, she turns up with grey hair and one eye blind, hobbling from the cold prison, and sitting by the miss Millie just like a black pet, I know that she has been domesticated by coldness torment and suffering.
  • Finally the story comes to the turning.
  • Celie finds that the letters her dearest sister had send to her are hided by Albert who tries to make Celie believe that her sister has dead, she resumes hope again, and it’s time to awake utterly for her.
  • The word she indignantly and dignifiedly speaks to the tyrant also awakes Sofia’s dead soul and Mary’s aspiration.
  • “Every thing you done on me already done on you” Celie leaves the prison where has imprisoned her youth, her hope and her soul, she leaves that line behind only, the gesture she says with, just like a holy preacher, who cursed the sinner in the name of god.
  • Then comes another climax, in Shug’s soul music, all happy endings come out, Albert explains Nellie’s legal immigration, and two sisters reunites again, while the old Albert have to live the rest lonely life.
    • This movie is end, yet the soul can not cease, “See daddy, sinners have souls too” Shug’s word still resounds in my head.
    • I don’t think Shug is a sinner, I think she is a special kind of preacher, who use her meaningful, passionate and exoteric songs to preach.
  • Though Yimou Zhang also expresses women’s misfortune in his movie, he did not let the women wake up; instead he makes the women go insane in the end.
    • But Steven Allan Spielberg gives audiences hope; that’s the difference between the styles of those two famous directors I think.

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  • Sentence 1
    • After I finished the movie The Color Purple directed by Steven Allan Spielberg who is one of my favorite directors.
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    • After I finished watching the movie The Color Purple directed by Steven Allan Spielberg who is one of my favorite directors.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Actually I was confused at the end of the movie, to the point, I haven’t got the main clue of this movie, just because plots of this movie skips too fast for me -who hasn’t read the novel-to understand.
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  • Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • The heroine Celie is raped by her stepfather who she calls “Pa”, and two children Olivia and Adam of her were sold by the cruel nature father.
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    • The heroine Celie is raped by her stepfather who she calls “Pa”, and her two children Olivia and Adam of her were sold by ther cruel natureal father.
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  • Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • In this part I was first astonished by Albert’s slapping on Celie’s face and saying you do what I tell you, because I begin to realize that Celie is not wife or even a person of him but a slave of his own.
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    • In this part I was first astonished by Albert’s slapping on Celie’s face and saying you do what I tell you,telling her to do whatever he told her because I begian to realize that Celie is not his wife or even a person of him but a slave of his own. but his own slave
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  • Sentence 8
    • After several days, to avoid Pa’s harassment the elder sister Nellie came to her brother in law’s home for shelter which turns out to be another abyss.
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    • After several days, to avoid Pa’s harassment, the elder sister Nellie came to her brother in law’s home for shelter, which turnsed out to be another abyss.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
    • It truly makes me disgusted when I see the scene that ugly and fake Albert riding on the galloping horse swings his hands like gentlemen and throwing out rose petal from his hat like playboy.
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    • It am truly makes me disgusted when I see the scene thatwhere the ugly and fake Albert is riding on the galloping horse swavings his hands like a gentlemean and throwing out rose petals from his hat like a playboy.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • Again and again Celie tries her best to remain her beloved sister for she knows there are no shelters for her to come, but under the shadow of the brute and physical strong man, the two girls’ struggle are in vain, step by step from the doorway to ground Celie grasps Nellie’s feet tightly, and she holds Nellie intensively onto the pillar, but little by little Nellie is drove out and dropped on the floor heavily.
      Vote now!
    • Again and again Celie tries her bestCelie tries continuously to remstrain her beloved sister for, because she knows there are no shelters for her to comego to, but under the shadow of the brute and physical strong man, the two girls’ struggles are in vain, s. Step by step from the doorway to the ground, Celie grasps Nellie’s feet tightly, and she holds Nellie intensively onto the pillar, but little by little Nellie is drove out andslips and is dropped on the floor heavily.
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  • Sentence 12
    • At this time a deep sense occurred to me that women are too feeble and vulnerable to fright for their right.
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    • At this time a deep sense occurred to mepoint I had the intense feeling that women are too feeble and vulnerable to fright for their rights.
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  • Sentence 13
    • The same sense came to my mind too when I watched the movie Raise The Red Lantern directed by Yimou Zhang, the heroine Song Lian married to a rich old man who has already had 3 wives, -of which the phenomenon was common in China in old times-she has neither right nor dignity in the big old house, women are just man’s toys and tools for giving birth to sons, they are not humankinds but dogs or cats, the master can execute his concubines privately that no one can disclose.
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  • Sentence 14
    • Whereas Celie’s situation is father worse than Song Lian, for she is a bimbo, a babysitter, a worker, and a slave instead of a wife.
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    • Whereas Celie’s situation is fathermuch worse than Song Lian, for's, as she is a bimbo, a babysitter, a worker, and a slave instead of a wife.
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  • Sentence 15
    • And groups of black women at that time were treated as born slaves, that’s the reason why when the poor Sofia’s being imprisoned by the mayor.
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    • Andt that time, groups of black women at that time were treated as born slaves, that’s the reason why when the poor Sofia’s being imprisoned by the mayorwhich caused the mayor's imprisonment of poor Sofia.
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  • Sentence 16
    • When the strong and fat Sofia besieged and cursed by angry white men and women, she is overwhelmed at last, the moment she calls for help makes me desperate, for I realized that not only the thin and mentally weak Calie like women are overwhelmed by men but also strong and fat Sofia like women should be surpassed by manhood, they are slaved by black man, by write women and by write men, Some honor man had said that no one is a lonely island, but I have to say that the black women are.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16
  • Sentence 17
    • Nevertheless sunset comes little by little, When Shug who is a singer also a sinner comes to Celie’s miserable life one night with heavy rain, roar thunder and gusty wind, which means everything should change and sunshine should come up soon.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 17
  • Sentence 18
  • Sentence 19
    • Shug’s beautiful song Miss Celie’s Blues easily break down Celie’s door of soul, and her gentle kiss nearly awakes Celie, but Celie is Celie, She ultimately can not gather her strength to fly with Shug, instead she faint and dropped on the floor.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 19
  • Sentence 20
  • Sentence 21
  • Sentence 22
    • To tell the truth, I thought Sofia should be the single black women who can change her life and state by her hand at first, however, to my disappointment, she turns up with grey hair and one eye blind, hobbling from the cold prison, and sitting by the miss Millie just like a black pet, I know that she has been domesticated by coldness torment and suffering.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 22
  • Sentence 23
  • Sentence 24
    • Celie finds that the letters her dearest sister had send to her are hided by Albert who tries to make Celie believe that her sister has dead, she resumes hope again, and it’s time to awake utterly for her.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 24ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 24
  • Sentence 25
  • Sentence 26
    • “Every thing you done on me already done on you” Celie leaves the prison where has imprisoned her youth, her hope and her soul, she leaves that line behind only, the gesture she says with, just like a holy preacher, who cursed the sinner in the name of god.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 26ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 26
  • Sentence 27
    • Then comes another climax, in Shug’s soul music, all happy endings come out, Albert explains Nellie’s legal immigration, and two sisters reunites again, while the old Albert have to live the rest lonely life.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 27ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 27
  • Sentence 28
    • This movie is end, yet the soul can not cease, “See daddy, sinners have souls too” Shug’s word still resounds in my head.
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    • This movie ihas ended, yet the soul can not cease, “See daddy, sinners have souls too”; Shug’s words still resounds in my head.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 28ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 28
  • Sentence 29
    • I don’t think Shug is a sinner, I think she is a special kind of preacher, who use her meaningful, passionate and exoteric songs to preach.
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    • I don’t think Shug is a sinner, I think she is a special kind of preacher, who uses her meaningful, passionate and exsoteric songs to preach.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 29ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 29
  • Sentence 30
    • Though Yimou Zhang also expresses women’s misfortune in his movie, he did not let the women wake up; instead he makes the women go insane in the end.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 30ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 30
  • Sentence 31
    • But Steven Allan Spielberg gives audiences hope; that’s the difference between the styles of those two famous directors I think.
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    • But Steven Allan Spielberg gives the audiences hope; in my opinion, that’s the difference between the styles of those two famous directors I think. ¶
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