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Сообщение от belarussian - English

    • Fast and harmful

    • You don’t have enough time to cook?
    • You never did it before and doesn’t have any wish?
    • Fast food is your rescue: tasty, hot, nutritious-always help you in hard situation.
    • You can buy it anywhere.
    • But what wrong about it?
    • All this benefits, that was described above , become disadvantages if we will look at them from other side of problem.
    • People who doesn’t have enough time to cook become addicted to fast food, and eat another type of food very seldom.
    • Such type of people become unhealthy, overweight and extremely unhappy very soon.
    • And it’s very hard to those people to cut down fat in future.
    • Okay, fast food is very unhealthy and harmful, but what can you advice to people who don’t have time to have normal meal.
    • They live in rhythm home-work-home-work.
    • I think such people SHOULD find time to have normal meal, or bring it from home.
    • It’s your choise: to find some free minutes in your workday or become a person described above.
    • Also Fast food is very popular among children nowadays.
    • And human become fat and ugly from childhood.
    • In my opinion parents is guilty in 100% when children spend all their pocket money in fast food and get addicted to it.
    • You can always control where and what your child eat, or even speak with them about harmfulness of fast food.
    • Fast food become an serious problem today but we can always deal with it and have nice and beautiful bodies.
    • Thanks for reading my text!
    • If you native language is English and to want to imrove your Russian write to me, I’L be very glad to make new English friends)

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