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Text from Shihs - English

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  • Today I went to Pingxi with my friend.
  • We made an appointment at 9:40, but I overslept.When I jumped up on my bed, it was already 9:46.
  • My friends was so nice.
  • We waited the next train.
  • Pingxi was so crowded.
  • There are a lot of families go out together during the vacations of Chinese New Year.
  • We just had lunch and flew the lanterns in Pingxi.
  • Then we took the train back to Taipei.
  • After eating dinner.
  • We chatted about out high school time, all the teachers in high school and all the funny things in that happy time.
  • And we also talked about the attitude toward learning.
  • When I was in high school, I didn't know why I have to learn all the subjects in classes.
  • But after I contacted with the knowledge I realize that how important they are.
  • Now, the only thing I can do just to work hard and to courage myself.

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