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  • Do you agree or disagree? There is nothing that the younger gen

    • It's a very widespread thought that the older person is, the wittier he or she becomes.
    • Of course, we cannot deny that age brings experience and this experience influences the decisions person makes.
    • On the contrary, the world is changing and in some cases, younger generation has more knowledge than the older one.
    • In my opinion, every person should learn something new and develop him- or herself by any chance.
  • And the older generation is not an exception.
    • There is some spheres of knowledge we are not acquainted with, and it's good when we have a chance to see some other side of life.
    • Moreover, sometimes older people think they have already lived their lives, but new feelings and overview of younger generation can help to understand that there is a lot of new, interesting things.
  • To sum up, I disagree that the older generation knows more than the younger one.
    • I think if everybody wants to discover something new every day with no differences of age, all of us will have more pleasant, full live.

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    • Of course, we cannot deny that age brings experience and this experience influences the decisions person makes.
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    • Of course, we cannot deny that age brings experience, and this experience influences the decisions a person makes.
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    • On the contrary, the world is changing and in some cases, younger generation has more knowledge than the older one.
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    • On the contrary, the world is changing, and in some cases, the younger generation has more knowledge than the older one.
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    • In my opinion, every person should learn something new and develop him- or herself by any chance.
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    • In my opinion, every person should learn something new and develop him- or herself by any chanceat every opportunity.
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    • There is some spheres of knowledge we are not acquainted with, and it's good when we have a chance to see some other side of life.
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    • There isare some spheres of knowledge we are not acquainted with, and it's good when we have a chance to see some other side of life.
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    • Moreover, sometimes older people think they have already lived their lives, but new feelings and overview of younger generation can help to understand that there is a lot of new, interesting things.
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    • Moreover, sometimes older people think they have already lived their lives, but new feelings and an overview of the younger generation can help to understand that there is a lot of new, interesting things.
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    • I think if everybody wants to discover something new every day with no differences of age, all of us will have more pleasant, full live.
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    • I think if everybody wants to discover something new every day with no differences of age, all of us will have more pleasant, full lives.
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