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    • Some Constructions To Be Happy In Your Life

    • The most thing that makes you so happy is the direct connection between you and God.
    • Ask him , call him ,pray to him ,warship him and believe in him .
  • The other thing is forgiving .
    • Forgive everybody what ever she or he did to you . when you go to bed at night say to yourself "I forgave everyone" .
    • This strategy works like scanning and deleting the virus that stuck during the day then you will be so clear and pure inside your heart and mind.
    • Also,the things what fill your heart more bright and light are the smile in your moth , charity to the poor , humanity, humility, simplicity , and honesty.

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    • Forgive everybody what ever she or he did to you . when you go to bed at night say to yourself "I forgave everyone" .
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    • Forgive everybody what ever sno matter what he or she didhas done to you . wWhen you go to bed at night say to yourself "I forgave everyone," .
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    • This strategy works like scanning and deleting the virus that stuck during the day then you will be so clear and pure inside your heart and mind.
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    • This strategy works like scanning and deleting thea virus that stuck during the day then; you will be so clear and pure inside your heart and mind.
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    • Also,the things what fill your heart more bright and light are the smile in your moth , charity to the poor , humanity, humility, simplicity , and honesty.
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    • Also, the things wthat fill your heart with more brightness and light are: the smile ion your moth face, charity to the poor , humanity, humility, simplicity , and honesty.
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