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  • February 12th

  • Today is Tuesday, February 12th.
    • Today I went to school, but I don't wore the uniform, I wore the sports uniform 'cause when play on the Champions League I like go to school wearing a shirt soccer team, today I wore a Juventus jersey.
    • I love my Juventus jersey 'cause is pink with a star black, that is my color.
    • The others girls don't undertand why I love the soccer.
  • When I was walking to return to my home, I said to Xiomy: "come on come, we go later to watch the match.
  • My mommy said to me in the morning: "daughter, you'll bring me those jellies that we saw the last weekend", when I returned I say to my mommy: "these are the jellies?", she said to my: "yeah", then I said to her: "but, give me one or two for my and Xiomy" Now I do my homework, the I said to Xiomy : "Lend me yours math notebooks", and she said to me: "these?", and I said to her: "those, are blue".
  • Well, I'm going to pay the challenged from yesterday.
  • Still I don't believe that I saw the sea :D.
  • Now I remenber that I need send the text on cell phone then bye bye.

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    • Today I went to school, but I don't wore the uniform, I wore the sports uniform 'cause when play on the Champions League I like go to school wearing a shirt soccer team, today I wore a Juventus jersey.
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    • Today I went to school, but I doidn't wore theear my (normal) uniform, I wore themy sports uniform 'cause when I play on the Champions League I like to go to school wearing a shirt soccer team, tmy (favorite) soccer team's shirt. Today I wore a Juventus jersey.
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    • My mommy said to me in the morning: "daughter, you'll bring me those jellies that we saw the last weekend", when I returned I say to my mommy: "these are the jellies?", she said to my: "yeah", then I said to her: "but, give me one or two for my and Xiomy" Now I do my homework, the I said to Xiomy : "Lend me yours math notebooks", and she said to me: "these?", and I said to her: "those, are blue".
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