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Practice English everyday
- I want to improve my English ability.
Yesterday, I chatted with the daughter of my mom's friend.
- They live in USA.
We chatted in English.But, I can't express exactly what I want to say.My English is too poor to express myself.
I feel a little upset...
I want to travel around the world.
English must be the most important skill that I have to master.
I just give myself a goal, practicing English everyday, no matter how busy or how tired.
I know I can do it and I will be a master English speaker.

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- I want to improve my English ability.
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- I want to improve my ~~English ability~~ability to communicate in English.
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- Yesterday, I chatted with the daughter of my mom's friend.
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- They live in USA.
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- They live in the USA.
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- We chatted in English.But, I can't express exactly what I want to say.My English is too poor to express myself.
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- I feel a little upset...
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- I want to travel around the world.
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- English must be the most important skill that I have to master.
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- I just give myself a goal, practicing English everyday, no matter how busy or how tired.
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- I know I can do it and I will be a master English speaker.
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