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My name is Igor.
- I born in Grozny city.
- It is in Chechnya.
- I and my family moved from there to the city of Togliatti and then to Moscow.
Now I am serving in the military far from home.
- In the summer of my service is over and I get back to Moscow.

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- Hello.
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句子 2
- My name is Igor.
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- I born in Grozny city.
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- I am born in Grozny cCity.
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- I was born in Grozny city.
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- It is in Chechnya.
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- It is inthe capital city of Chechnya.
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- I and my family moved from there to the city of Togliatti and then to Moscow.
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- ~~I and m~~My family ~~moved from there~~and I moved to the city of Togliatti and then to Moscow.
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句子 6
- Now I am serving in the military far from home.
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- In the summer of my service is over and I get back to Moscow.
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- In the summer of my service is will be over, and I ~~get~~will go back to Moscow.
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- In ~~the~~ summer of my service iswill be over and I ~~get~~will be back to Moscow.
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