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- I would have learn english
Hi !
- My name is lorelei, i'm in hight school and after, i would travell around the world.
- So i must speack english very well.
- Did somebody want to talk with me ?
- I could learn to him french.
- Thanks to help me.

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- I would have learn english
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- I would ~~have~~like to learn eEnglish.
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- Hi !
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- My name is lorelei, i'm in hight school and after, i would travell around the world.
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- My name is lLorelei, iI'm currently in hight school and ~~after, i would~~would love to travell around the world after.
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- So i must speack english very well.
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- So ~~i must speack english very well~~I have to be really good in English.
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- So i must speack english very well.
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- Did somebody want to talk with me ?
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- D~~id some~~oes anybody want to talk with me ?
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- Didoes somebody want to talk ~~with~~to me ?
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- I could learn to him french.
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- I c~~ould learn to~~an teach him fFrench.
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- I c~~ould learn to him~~an help him learn french.
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- Thanks to help me.
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- Thanks tofor helping me.
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I would have learn english

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