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  • Dear Mr. Jones, My name is Lucas.
  • I am contacting you to apply for the manager position to cover the South-American market.
    • When I read the advert, I started to search for more information about your company.
    • I found you on twitter, on Facebook, and also the website.
    • I believe I could do a good job as your Market Manager for the South-American market, mostly because I know very well the profile of the middle/upper class in that region.
  • My work in the Brazil-UE Parliamentary group, for example, allowed me to participate in a lot of meetings in Embassies, as well as getting in touch with diplomats and ambassadors.
  • During my internship in the International Relations Advisory Office of the Argentinean National Congress I was responsible for booking hotels, flights and restaurants whenever the Chairman of the Argentinean Congress needed to go on an international trip.
  • I also worked organizing meetings with foreign delegations.
    • And I would say that working as a waiter when I was a teenager gave me a sense of responsibility and how to interact with people that helped me in all my other jobs/internships.
  • Finally, being a 24 years-old man gives me high energy and motivation for everything I do in my life, and of course, I am web-culture-literate.
    • For more informations, please find attached my resume.
  • Respectfully, Lucas T.

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    • I believe I could do a good job as your Market Manager for the South-American market, mostly because I know very well the profile of the middle/upper class in that region.
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    • I believe I could do a good job asam a good candidate for your Market Manager for the South-American market, mostly because I knowam very wellfamiliar with the profile of the middle/upper class in that region.
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    • My work in the Brazil-UE Parliamentary group, for example, allowed me to participate in a lot of meetings in Embassies, as well as getting in touch with diplomats and ambassadors.
      투표하세요!
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    • During my internship in the International Relations Advisory Office of the Argentinean National Congress I was responsible for booking hotels, flights and restaurants whenever the Chairman of the Argentinean Congress needed to go on an international trip.
      투표하세요!
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    • And I would say that working as a waiter when I was a teenager gave me a sense of responsibility and how to interact with people that helped me in all my other jobs/internships.
      투표하세요!
    • And I would say that working as a waitWorking as a restaurant server when I was a teenager gave me a sense of responsibility and how to interact with peopledeveloped my customer service skills that helped me in all my other jobs/internships.
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    • Finally, being a 24 years-old man gives me high energy and motivation for everything I do in my life, and of course, I am web-culture-literate.
      투표하세요!
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