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Hi!
- Hello everybody !
- My name is Jenny, I'm 15 years old.
I'm from France.
- I can teach you to speak French and Guadeloupean Creole.
I want to improve my English and make friends.

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- My name is Jenny, I'm 15 years old.
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- My name is Jenny, and I'm 15 years old.
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- I can teach you to speak French and Guadeloupean Creole.
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- I can teach you how to speak French and Guadeloupean Creole.
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